生活中我们有很多东西需要与人分享，比如：好书、美食、经验、快乐……，请你以"I'd like to share____with you．"为题写一篇短文．

要求：

1．请将题目补充完整；

2．介绍与该主题相关的个人经历，说明分享原因，谈谈个人感悟；

3．语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯，书写工整、规范；

4．词数70左右；

5．文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名．

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答案

【分析】高分句型一：

I have read many books and I would like to share my favorite book the Adventures of Tom Sawyer with you．我读过很多书，我想和你分享我最喜欢的书《汤姆•索耶历险记》．句子中would like to do sth表示想做某事．

高分句型二：

 In my opinion， the story is so interesting and enjoyable that it is worth reading．在我看来，这个故事既有趣又令人愉快，值得一读．be worth doing sth表示值得做某事．

【解答】I'd like to share a good book with you

As everybody knows， books are the ladder of human progress． I have read many books and I would like to share my favorite book the Adventures of Tom Sawyer with you．【高分句型一】（最喜欢的书） I have read it many times． The book is written by Mark Twain， a famous American writer． Tom who is the hero of the story is a lively and clever boy． He and his best friend Huck Finn ran away to an island． The most exciting part is when Tom and Huck start their adventures on the island．（分享的原因） In my opinion， the story is so interesting and enjoyable that it is worth reading．【高分句型二】（个人感悟）

【点评】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文以I'd like to share a good book with you为题目，在文中分享了自己最喜欢的一本书，简单介绍了书的主要角色、内容以及自己喜欢它的原因．文中内容充实、完整，叙述条理，逻辑清晰．短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，谓语动词形式准确，语法规范．句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯．句式以简单句为主，并使用了并列句、状语从句、被动语态、非谓语动词等复杂结构，表达流畅，意思连贯．

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