新冠肺炎疫情牵动着全国人民的心,各地教师为响应教育部“停课不停学”的号召纷纷开展线上教学活动。线上教学有何优缺点?你对于线上教学有什么好的建议?请根据提示写一篇英语文章谈谈你对“线上教学”的看法。
写作要点:
1. Advantages(stay away from disease/make use of time/...);
2. Disadvantages(distract(使分心) students from study/bad for eyes/...);
3. Suggestions on online study(...).
要求:
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 书写工整,尽量不要涂改,词数不少于80, 开头不计入总词数。
Ever since the NCP began, it has stopped most people from leaving their homes, |
especially students. |
例文
In order to let students keep studying, all teachers begin online teaching activities. It means all students study online at home by watching TV. Here are some advantages of online study. It can make them safe by staying away disease. Meanwhile, students can make use of time at home instead of talking with other students or something else that will waste their time at school. However, some games online may distract students from study. At the same time, spending a long time on the TV screen is bad for their eyes. Many parents and teachers wonder whether the students studying or not online.
In my opinion, if we can make a good plan for the online study and the parents can help check the kids’ homework and study in time, online study will be a good chance for students to develop efficient and useful learning habits. After all, students are the true masters of study.
【解析】
1.题干解读:该题属于话题写作。写作时要注意文章承接开头,内容要写齐全。
2.例文点评:例文采用二段式,第一大段陈述线上教学的优点和缺点;第二大段陈述我对线上教学的建议和看法,结构清晰,段落分明。用第一人称来进行写作分析;时态采用一般现在时为主。
3.高分亮点:
短语:In order to,keep studying,in my opinion,stay away,At the same time,be bad for。
句型:if引导的条件状语从句,whether引导宾语从句,定语从句。
深圳市正在争创全国文明城市、假定你是鹏城中学学生会主席,希望同学们为"创文'做出自己的贡献。请你按照所提示的要点,代表学生会写一篇倡议书。
环境保护 | ①垃圾分类;②绿色出行 |
公益慈善 | ①志愿服务;②…… |
人际交往 | ①诚信友善;②…… |
要求:
1、词数80左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数);
2、要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3、条理清晰,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范;
4、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇:分类 sort out 志愿者volunteer 贡献 contribution
Dear friends,
As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China's National Civilized City.
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All in all, Shenzhen is our home. It's time to take action.
The Student Union
July 20, 2020
少年智则国智,少年强则国强。根据下图提示写一篇英语短文, 描述作为青少年的你们将如何成长,并说明原因或目的。除了提示中的内容,请你至少再补充一条。
build up our bodies by…; keep strong and healthy |
| develop some interests; for example,…; make ourselves fully developed |
do housework; such as…; help parents; learn to be independent (独立的) | ? |
要求:
1、语言通顺, 要点齐全, 意思连贯, 条理清楚, 书写规范;
2、文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
3、80~100词, 文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
As teenagers, we are the future of our homeland. We should develop ourselves fully. But how? Here is my opinion.
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