少年智则国智,少年强则国强。根据下图提示写一篇英语短文, 描述作为青少年的你们将如何成长,并说明原因或目的。除了提示中的内容,请你至少再补充一条。
build up our bodies by…; keep strong and healthy |
| develop some interests; for example,…; make ourselves fully developed |
do housework; such as…; help parents; learn to be independent (独立的) | ? |
要求:
1、语言通顺, 要点齐全, 意思连贯, 条理清楚, 书写规范;
2、文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;
3、80~100词, 文章开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
As teenagers, we are the future of our homeland. We should develop ourselves fully. But how? Here is my opinion.
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One possible version:
As teenagers, we are the future of our homeland. We should develop ourselves fully. But how? Here is my opinion.
Basically, we should build up our bodies by taking some exercise, doing some sports, such as running, swimming, playing basketball and so on. In this way, we can keep ourselves strong and healthy/we will grow up strong and healthy.
What's more, developing some interests is a good way to make ourselves fully developed. We can learn to play the piano, sing songs, dance, collect stamps, draw pictures and so on. As a saying says. "You can never learn too much."
In addition. I think it's our duty to do some housework at home. We should help do some cleaning, water the flowers or walk the dog. Then our parents can live an easier life. Also, by doing this, we can learn to be independent and get ourselves well prepared for the future life.
If we do these things well, we will be able to grow up as a fully developed person.
【解析】
1.题干解读:这篇作文要求我们根据提示并至少再补充一条,写一篇英语短文, 描述青少年将如何成长,并说明原因或目的。在写作时,我们可以列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达,根据需要将这些信息进行重新整理和安排,使文章的意思更自然。可以使用一些好的句型和连词,使文章上下文意思连贯。
2.例文点评:本文时态为一般现在时,人称主要为第一人称。文章紧扣题目要点,内容完整,表述准确,语言的表述符合语法的结构,造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点:
短语:build up;in this way;keep ourselves strong;what's more;in addition;live an easier life。
句型:宾语从句I think it's our duty to do some housework at home.
条件状语从句If we do these things well, we will be able to grow up as a fully developed person.
深圳市正在争创全国文明城市、假定你是鹏城中学学生会主席,希望同学们为"创文'做出自己的贡献。请你按照所提示的要点,代表学生会写一篇倡议书。
环境保护 | ①垃圾分类;②绿色出行 |
公益慈善 | ①志愿服务;②…… |
人际交往 | ①诚信友善;②…… |
要求:
1、词数80左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数);
2、要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3、条理清晰,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范;
4、文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
参考词汇:分类 sort out 志愿者volunteer 贡献 contribution
Dear friends,
As we know, Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China's National Civilized City.
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All in all, Shenzhen is our home. It's time to take action.
The Student Union
July 20, 2020
新冠肺炎疫情牵动着全国人民的心,各地教师为响应教育部“停课不停学”的号召纷纷开展线上教学活动。线上教学有何优缺点?你对于线上教学有什么好的建议?请根据提示写一篇英语文章谈谈你对“线上教学”的看法。
写作要点:
1. Advantages(stay away from disease/make use of time/...);
2. Disadvantages(distract(使分心) students from study/bad for eyes/...);
3. Suggestions on online study(...).
要求:
1. 短文应包括提示中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 书写工整,尽量不要涂改,词数不少于80, 开头不计入总词数。
Ever since the NCP began, it has stopped most people from leaving their homes, |
especially students. |