为了提高英语写作水平,你们英语老师要求你们每天用英语写日记。假如今天是星期日(4月12日),你和你的家人出去春游了,玩得非常开心。请你根据下面表格中的提示,用英语写一则日记,可适当发挥。
要求:80词左右,日记的格式已给出,不计入总词数。
天气 | 阳光明媚 | |
活动 | 上午 | 爬山,放风筝,植树 |
中午 | 吃自带食物 | |
下午 | 参观农场 | |
感受 | 累但很开心 |
Sunday, April 12th
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Sunday, April 12th
The weather was sunny today. I had a trip with my family.
In the morning, we climbed the hills. On the top of the hills we flew kites. We also planted trees. At noon, we enjoyed the food we brought in a big tent. The food tasted delicious. In the afternoon, we visited a big farm in the countryside. We fed hens and ducks. We also saw lots of baby pigs there.
What a great day! All of us felt tired but really happy.
【分析】
这篇作文要求我们用英语写一篇日记,记叙自己星期天和家人一起出游的事情,内容包括:那天的天气情况;主要的活动以及自己的感受等。短文中应包括这三个部分的内容,并对主要内容即当天的活动进行细致的描述,使文章的内容更加充实。
【详解】
通过审题可知,这篇作文记叙的是过去发生的事情,全文应使用一般过去时态,注意谓语动词应变为过去式,尤其要注意不规则动词过去式的形式。人称应用第一人称。写作时,应按照时间顺序记叙当天的活动,不要混乱。另外应注意英语表达习惯和汉语是不同的,我们不能逐词翻译句子,而应从整体考虑,使用恰当的词汇、句型和短语,以简单句结构为主,辅以并列句和复合句,调整文章节奏,提升文章档次。同时注意语句之间使用恰当的连接成分,使文意连贯。
点睛:这是一篇优秀的作文。首先短文内容完整,包含了题目要求的所有信息,没有遗漏要点。文章中作者根据时间顺序记叙了和家人的一次春游,叙述清晰、明了,有层次。短文第一段先介绍了当天的天气情况;然后是这一天的活动;最后用两句话发表了自己的感受。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,因为是记叙一件过去的事情,全文使用了一般过去时态,,谓语动词都变成了过去式,并且注意了不规则动词过去式的形式,如was, had, saw, felt等,语法规范、准确,句式简洁,以简单句为主,符合英语的表达习惯。文章中也使用了一些较好的短语和句型,如In the morning, we climbed the hills. On the top of the hills we flew kites.、We also saw lots of baby pigs there.、What a great day! 、All of us felt tired but really happy.等。
The Blog of Rosie
The Weekend
By Rosie | June 6, 2016
Hi! I’m on vacation here in London… and it’s fantastic! On Saturday I was in the British Museum for three hours. On Sunday I visited Tower Bridge. Where were you over the weekend? Tell me your news!
DISCUSSION
Sophia·9:30
Glad you’re having a great vacation. I was in the Summer Palace in Beijing on Saturday. I was there for a flower show. It was amazing! And there were lots of people. But on Sunday it was rainy and I wasn’t very well. I stayed in bed for a whole day.
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Steve·10:10
It was cloudy the whole weekend in Paris. On Saturday I was at a football game with my classmates. It was exciting! On Sunday I was at the shops with Ann for four hours.
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Jack·11:00
I wasn’t at home over the weekend. On Saturday I was in Scotland for a trip. It was a lovely, warm day and I had a picnic with friends. It was great! Sunday was boring. It took me five hours to get back home. It was a long journey.
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Kate·11:20
On Saturday I was at Heathrow Airport. I met a friend there and we talked together for two hours. I was very happy. On Saturday I was in Sydney for a concert. It is winter in Australia. And it was windy and cold!
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32.On Saturday Sophia was .
A.in the Summer Palace
B.in the British Museum
C.at Tower Bridge
D.at Heathrow Airport
33.What was the weather like when Steve was in Paris?
A.Rainy. B.Warm. C.Cloudy. D.Cold.
34.How long did it take Jack to get back home?
A.Two hours B.Three hours
C.Four hours D.Five hours
35.Kate was in Sydney for .
A.a picnic B.a concert
C.a football game D.a flower show
Tony and Jane give their opinions about keeping pet dogs.
Keeping pet dogs is a good idea, says Tony | Keeping pet dogs is not a good idea, say Jane |
74.Tony would probably think it____ to put pet dogs on beds.
A.uncomfortable B.acceptable C.dangerous
75.The underlined word “they” in the passage refers to(指) “ ____”.
A.beds B.sofas C.pet dogs
76.From the underlined part, we can guess “vet” means“ ____”.
A.兽医 B.宠物店 C.驯兽师
77.Tony and Jane disagree on ____.
A.the growth of pets
B.the sound made by dogs
C.the money paid for pets
78.It can be learned from the passage that ____.
A.people are not allowed to keep pet dogs
B.people are encouraged to keep pet dogs
C.opinions are divided on keeping pet dogs