假设下表内是你上周末的活动,请以“My Busy Weekend”为题,描写一下你的周末生活。
要求:(1)行文流畅,书写认真,条理清晰,语句通顺;(2)不少于50词,结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
时间 | 活动 | |
星期六 | 上午 | 做作业 |
下午 | 打扫房间 | |
晚上 | 在电脑前看了一部新电影 | |
星期日 | 上午 | 和朋友打篮球 |
下午 | 去市场买食物 | |
晚上 | 看了一场周杰伦的演唱会(concert) |
My Busy Weekend
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I was a little tired, but I had a good time.
My Busy Weekend
I had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, I did my homework and then did some reading. In the afternoon, I cleaned my room. I watched a new movie on the computer in the evening. On Sunday, I played basketball with my good friends in the morning. In the afternoon, I went to the market to buy some food. In the evening, I went to Jay Chou's concert. It was very exciting.
I_was_a_little_tired,_but_I_had_a_good_time.
【解析】
【详解】
这篇作文要求我们以My Busy Weekend为题,介绍自己的周末生活。题目中利用表格的形式列出了上个周末两天的活动,我们应用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来,并补充更多的细节内容,使文章内容更加丰富、具体、充实。首先通过审题可知,文章介绍的是自己上个周末的活动,因此这篇短文应用一般过去时,注意谓语动词应变为过去式形式,尤其注意不规则动词过去式的变化;其次英语句式结构和表达习惯和汉语是不同的,写作时不能按照表格内容逐词翻译,应从句子的整体结构出发,写完整的句子。如可以简单句结构中的主谓宾或主系表结构为主,这样的句子结构简洁,叙述清晰、明了。穿插使用并列句或者状语从句以及其他复杂句式,提升文章档次。同时语句之间注意使用恰当的连接成分,使文章表达流畅、连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文,短文作者根据题目要求介绍了自己上个周末的活动。首先短文内容完整,包括了表格中的所有信息,没有遗漏要点。写作中作者对题目中的关键词加以补充,扩展成完整的句子,按照时间的顺序进行叙述,比较有条理,层次也很清晰。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称,文章以第一人称I、一般过去时态为主来叙述,谓语动词形式准确,尤其注意了不规则动词过去式的变化,如had, did, went等。句子结构完整,表达清楚,用词准确,语言得体。句式以简单句为主,叙述清楚、简洁。短文中使用了一些较好的短语和句型,如On Saturday morning, I did my homework and then did some reading、I watched a new movie on the computer in the evening、In the afternoon, I went to the market to buy some food.、It was very exciting等等。
The Blog of Rosie
The Weekend
By Rosie | June 6, 2016
Hi! I’m on vacation here in London… and it’s fantastic! On Saturday I was in the British Museum for three hours. On Sunday I visited Tower Bridge. Where were you over the weekend? Tell me your news!
DISCUSSION
Sophia·9:30
Glad you’re having a great vacation. I was in the Summer Palace in Beijing on Saturday. I was there for a flower show. It was amazing! And there were lots of people. But on Sunday it was rainy and I wasn’t very well. I stayed in bed for a whole day.
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Steve·10:10
It was cloudy the whole weekend in Paris. On Saturday I was at a football game with my classmates. It was exciting! On Sunday I was at the shops with Ann for four hours.
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Jack·11:00
I wasn’t at home over the weekend. On Saturday I was in Scotland for a trip. It was a lovely, warm day and I had a picnic with friends. It was great! Sunday was boring. It took me five hours to get back home. It was a long journey.
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Kate·11:20
On Saturday I was at Heathrow Airport. I met a friend there and we talked together for two hours. I was very happy. On Saturday I was in Sydney for a concert. It is winter in Australia. And it was windy and cold!
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32.On Saturday Sophia was .
A.in the Summer Palace
B.in the British Museum
C.at Tower Bridge
D.at Heathrow Airport
33.What was the weather like when Steve was in Paris?
A.Rainy. B.Warm. C.Cloudy. D.Cold.
34.How long did it take Jack to get back home?
A.Two hours B.Three hours
C.Four hours D.Five hours
35.Kate was in Sydney for .
A.a picnic B.a concert
C.a football game D.a flower show
Tony and Jane give their opinions about keeping pet dogs.
Keeping pet dogs is a good idea, says Tony | Keeping pet dogs is not a good idea, say Jane |
74.Tony would probably think it____ to put pet dogs on beds.
A.uncomfortable B.acceptable C.dangerous
75.The underlined word “they” in the passage refers to(指) “ ____”.
A.beds B.sofas C.pet dogs
76.From the underlined part, we can guess “vet” means“ ____”.
A.兽医 B.宠物店 C.驯兽师
77.Tony and Jane disagree on ____.
A.the growth of pets
B.the sound made by dogs
C.the money paid for pets
78.It can be learned from the passage that ____.
A.people are not allowed to keep pet dogs
B.people are encouraged to keep pet dogs
C.opinions are divided on keeping pet dogs