请仔细观察下面的图片,并根据所给提示和要求写一篇短文。
提示:
(1)What are the man and the boy doing?
(2)What kind of influence does using mobile phones may bring?
(3)What is your attitude (态度) towards this behavior?
要求:
(1)短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥;
(2)短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名;
(3)词数80个左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
参考词汇:secretly; technology; natural; convenient; focus on (集中注意力在……上)
We can see a man and a boy in the picture. The man is______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We can see a man and a boy in the picture. The man is teaching a class. The boy is having a class, but he is playing with his mobile phone secretly.
With the fast development of technology, it is natural for students to have mobile phones in hand. They can use their mobile phones to do something they like at any time in any place. It seems very convenient. But the mobile phones also bring some bad influences on their study and life. They can’t focus on their study. They lose themselves in their own life and don’t want to communicate with others.
As students, I think we should pay attention to what our teacher says instead of playing with the phones. What’s more, we can’t spend too much time playing with the phones in our free time.
【解析】1.题干解读:本篇是看图作文,首先要仔细观察图中那男人的和男孩在干什么,以此为线索,谈谈使用手机会带来什么样的影响并阐述自己对这种行为所持的态度;书写时要注意发挥想象力,使短文的内容完整合理。图片描述的是正在发生的动作,用现在进行时,谈论手机的影响和自己的观点用一般现在时。
2.例文点评:本例文层次分明。文章按照先描述画面内容,接着陈述使用手机会带来的影响并阐述自己对这种行为所持的态度;最后阐述自己对课堂上使用手机的观点,短文逻辑清楚,内容完整连贯。
3.高分亮点:本篇使用的短语With the fast development of technology;at any time;focus on;lose oneself in;communicate with。
高分句型:
I think we should pay attention to what our teacher says instead of playing with the phones.(宾语从句)
It is natural for students to have mobile phones in hand.(固定句型)But the mobile phones also bring some bad influences on their study and life.
They can’t focus on their study.
They lose themselves in their own life and don’t want to communicate with others.。
【点睛】本篇看图作文书写前需仔细观察图片,根据图片提示确定文章的线索,根据线索陈述使用手机会带来的影响并阐述自己对这种行为所持的态度;书写时要紧扣线索,做到内容完整、连贯;书写时注意本篇涉及现在进行时和一般现在时2种时态,要避免时态使用混乱。
你的偶像是谁?你崇拜谁?下表是腾飞中学一些学生的回答,假如你是该校的一位学生,请根据下表的文字提示,谈谈你校同学的偶像观,并适当发表自己的观点。写一篇英语短文。
过去的偶像:歌星、影视明星 | 1.明星有酷的发型和服饰,他们很时尚; 2.他们有天赋,会表演有趣的节目; 3.他们的表演让人放松,让我们的生活丰富多彩。 |
如今的偶像:科学家、医护人员等 | 1.科学家发明高科技产品来保卫国家安全,提高人们的生活水平; 2.医生和护士拯救人们的生命,帮助人们摆脱痛苦,恢复健康; 3.当国家和人民处于困境时,他们用智慧,勇气、辛勤的工作来帮助人们。 |
你的观点 | 那些在危难中帮助我们的人们更值得我们尊重和崇拜,作为学生的我们…… |
要求:1.80-100词。(开头的首句已给出,不计算在词数内)
2.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其它相关信息,否则,不予评分。
参考词汇:idol 偶像 fashionable时尚的 wisdom 智慧 respect 尊重
Last week, our school did a survey about “Who is your idol?”. Here are our answers. In the past, we_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________