在许多地方,家长开汽车接送孩子上下学已成为一个普遍现象,人们对此做法褒贬不一。请你根据下表提示用英语写一篇短文,并发表自己的看法。
赞成 | 反对 |
1.为学生节约时间; 2.增加家长跟孩子交流的机会; 3........。 | 1.使交通更加拥挤; 2.增加家长的负担(lay a burden on); 3.......。 |
注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.开头已给出。
3.120个词左右。
In many places, it is common for parents to drive their children to and from school, which causes a heated debate in society.
例文
In many places, it’s common for parents to drive their children to and from school, which causes a heated debate in society.
Some people think driving children to school can save their valuable time, in which way the children can get enough sleep. Besides, it is comfortable and safe for children. Also, it offers more chances for parents to communicate with their children.
However, others hold different opinions. They think it may result in traffic jams. And it will lay a burden on parents. In addition, children may become too dependent on their parents.
As far as I’m concerned, if it is convenient, of course, parents can drive children to school sometimes. But parents should keep it in mind that it’s better for children to be independent.
【详解】
1.题干解读:本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文,主题是家长开车接送孩子上下学已成为一个普遍现象,给出了大部分要点,就是对这个现象的不同观点,要考生给出自己的观点。本文时态主要是一般现在时。认为阅读材料,认真审题,可知文章结构清晰,先是一些同学认为赞成的观点,然后是反对的观点,最后是自己的观点,要求观点明确,选择词汇的时候要选择相对高级的词汇,也要运用多种句型。可适当发挥,运用了合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章条理清晰连贯,单词拼写语法正确,书写规范,字数在120词之间。
2.例文点评:例文符合题目要求,描述了正反方观点,并表达了自己的观点。时态使用正确,表达条理清楚连贯,没有语法单词拼写错误,字数符合要求,运用了合适的连接词或过渡词,文章思路清晰,富有逻辑性。
3.高分亮点:
(一)短语和连词的使用:besides,communicate with,however,in addition,As far as I’m concerned等。
(二)句型:(1)Some people think driving children to school can save their valuable time, in which way the children can get enough sleep.
(2)if it is convenient, of course, parents can drive children to school sometimes.(3)But parents should keep it in mind that it’s better for children to be independent.等。