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Teens Around the World |
Subject: Gifts |
Hey, guys! Have you ever received gifts on some special days? Which of them do you like best? Can you remember who gave it to you? When did you get it? What’s it like and why do you like it? Please share the story of the gift with us. Becky, England |
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例文
Dear Becky,
Everyone receives many gifts on some special days, so do I. Of all the gifts, I like books very much.
That was on my twelfth birthday party. I invited many friends to come to the party. My best friends Lily sent me a book about history. The history book made me know more about the history and culture. From then on, I began to like reading. I think reading can not only help me relax, but also open a new world for me. I will read more and more books frow now on.
Li Hua, China
【详解】 1. 题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。围绕 “ 礼物 ” 写一篇短文。
2. 写作指导:本文采用一般过去时和一般现在时为主,人称以第一人称为主。分为两段式:第一段引出主题;第二段介绍自己收这个礼物的经历,喜欢这份礼物的原因以及自己的感受。写作时保持主谓一致性,做到无语法和标点错误。