假如正在上海学习的美国交换留学生Henry想要结交更多的中国朋友,通过他们来更好的了解中国的文化,因此他写了一封交友信,作了自我介绍,并希望大家积极回复。请你用英语给他回信。
Dear friend,
I'm Henry from the UK. I want to make more Chinese friends. Can you tell me something about you?
What's your personality?
What's your favourite colour? Why?
I like listening to rock music and watching science fiction films in my spare time. What about you?
Who do you admire most? You parent, teachers, or famous stars? Why?
Look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes
Henry
Dear friend,
I'm Henry from the UK. I want to make more Chinese friends. Can you tell me something about you?
What's your personality?
What's your favourite colour? Why?
I like listening to rock music and watching science fiction films in my spare time. What about you?
Who do you admire most? You parent, teachers, or famous stars? Why?
Look forward to hearing from you.
Best wishes
Henry
要求 1.文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并作适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的人名;
3.词数90词左右,短文开头结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Henry ,
I'm lucky to see your email on the Internet. I'm very glad to make friends with you.
I hope you will have a food time in China.
Yours ,
Sandy
Dear Henry ,
I'm lucky to see your email on the Internet. I'm very glad to make friends with you.
I am Sandy and I come from Beijing, the capital of China. I am a cheerful, active and easy-going girl. My Mom and Dad are very fond of me, but I like my grandmother most, because she is a singer and can play the piano very well. Although she is very old, she is still working hard to play the piano,and I really appreciate her spirit.
I am usually busy studying. Sometimes, I like to watch sci-fi movies in my spare time. It feels great, and can make me relaxed and increase my knowledge. I especially like the vast universe, because the mysterious deep purple is my favorite color.
I hope you will have a food time in China.
Yours ,
Sandy
【解析】
【详解】
学生首先要认真阅读材料中Henry回信的内容,认真审题,确定文章的中心。本文是写一封回信。依据文中给出的回信的开头和结尾,可知回信要把自己当作Sandy,写作时要注意Henry来信中的问题都需要回答或涉及到。比如:
1、你的个性是什么?
2、什么是你最喜欢的颜色? 为什么?
3、Henry喜欢在业余时间听摇滚音乐和看科幻电影。 你呢?
4、你最欣赏谁? 你的父母,老师还是着名的明星? 为什么?
此外,写作的文章具有一定的连贯性,还应注意使用一些连接词,使文章的表达更有逻辑性和条理性。写作时还要注意:1.书写规范;2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;3.写完后要认真检查是否有漏写要点,有无拼写错误等。
高分句型:I like my grandmother most, because she is a singer and can play the piano very well. 我最喜欢我的祖母,因为她是一个歌手,钢琴弹得很好。本句中用了最高级,most的表达方法。I especially like the vast universe, because the mysterious deep purple is my favorite color.我特别喜欢浩瀚的宇宙,因为神秘的深紫色是我最喜欢的颜色。Although she is very old, she is still working hard to play the piano,and I really appreciate her spirit.虽然她很老了,但她仍然努力学习弹钢琴,我真的很欣赏她的精神。
【点睛】
注意写作过程中,将要点展开并表达清楚,注意使用英语的经典句型,避免出现汉语表达。
在许多地方,家长开汽车接送孩子上下学已成为一个普遍现象,人们对此做法褒贬不一。请你根据下表提示用英语写一篇短文,并发表自己的看法。
赞成 | 反对 |
1.为学生节约时间; 2.增加家长跟孩子交流的机会; 3........。 | 1.使交通更加拥挤; 2.增加家长的负担(lay a burden on); 3.......。 |
注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2.开头已给出。
3.120个词左右。
In many places, it is common for parents to drive their children to and from school, which causes a heated debate in society.