请写一封不少于 60 个词的电子邮件来回复你的笔友Danny。
假如你是Jo,刚收到笔友Danny的一封电子邮件,想了解最近有关你在家学习的情况。请结合具体事例谈谈你的学习体会与感受。邮件格式己给。
Dear Jo,
How are you these days? I know that in the war of fighting COVID-19 (冠状病毒), you are now studying at home, having school lessons online. It's really a new and special way of learning. Please tell me your experience of online learning these days.
Take care,
Danny
(注意:短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息,否则不予评分。标点符号不占格。)
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例文:
Dear Danny,
I sincerely appreciate your concern for my study. As you known, because of the serious COVID-19 epidemic, the starting date of the spring semester has been postponed and we are staying at home for further notice.
At present, the school has launched online courses for us, using an application called Ding Ding, through which the teachers’ live stream lectures and give us assignments. We’re now adjusted to the learning model, realizing it is of great significance to the learning of students at home, and it contributes to the epidemic prevention as well.
As winter retreats and spring approaches, I’m sure NCP will be under control and we’re looking forward to going to school soon.
Yours,
Jo
【解析】
1.题干解读:本文是一篇书信作文。根据题干要求主要介绍疫情期间你在家的学习情况以及感受,可以适当发挥。需要注意的就是,时态为现在时,内容上要做到连贯,完整。
2.例文点评:本文采取三段式,根据题干中的要求,第一段介绍了因疫情原因开学时间被推迟;第二段介绍了上网课的方式和自己感受;第三段写了自己的期许。整篇例文语句通顺,条理清晰,词组,短语等运用灵活,多种句式交替运用,给文章增色不少。
3.高分亮点:
短语:appreciate…for…;because of;further notice;stay at home;give sb. sth.;live stream lectures;adjust to;at home;contribute to;as well;under control;look forward to;go to school。
句型:I sincerely appreciate…;and 并列复合句;“介词+关系代词”引导的非限制性定语从句;as引导的时间状语从句。