假如你是光明中学的李霞 , 你有一个好朋友叫韩彤 , 她的弟弟叫韩林 , 今年他 12 岁。你有写英文日记的好习惯。请根据以下汉语提示写一篇英文日记 , 并表达自己的看法。上周日上午你去韩彤家帮她学习英语 , 恰巧她的父母不在家 , 只有韩彤和她的奶奶、弟弟在家 , 到她家时 , 你发现 :
1. 奶奶感到身体不适 , 看起来很痛苦 , 躺在床上 , 而她弟弟韩林却在开心玩着电脑游戏
2. 韩彤询问奶奶病情、测体温 , 给父母打电话 , 并向网上医生求助 ;
3. 奶奶在韩彤帮助下服用合适的药物之后 , 身体状况好转 ;
4. 你认为： …… （至少两点）
参考词汇：
痛苦的 painful 网上医生 online doctor 中华传统美德 traditional Chinese virtues
要求：
（ 1 ）词数： 80-100 个
（ 2 ）日记格式和开头已给出 , 不计入总数
（ 3 ）要点齐全 , 行文连贯 , 可适当发挥
Sunday
In the morning, I went to Han Tong's home to help her with her English. When I got there, I found________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
例文
Sunday
In the morning, I went to Han Tong's home to help her with her English. When I got there, I found her grandmother felt ill, who looked so quite painful that she had to stay in bed. As far as I know, her brother Han Lin, a 12-year-old boy, is old enough to do many things. However, to my amazement, he was still playing video games happily instead of doing anything to help take care of their grandmother, as if everything around him had nothing to do with him.
On the contrary, Han Tong appeared very calm, and she was trying her best to help her grandmother. At first, Han Tong asked her grandmother for some information about her health and took her temperature. After that, she called her parents to tell them what was happening to her grandmother.
And then she asked the online doctor for some help. Thanks to the doctor’s advice, after grandmother took the right medicine with Lin Tong’s help, she felt better soon.
As we all know, Caring the old is one of traditional Chinese virtues. In my opinion, on the one hand, Han Lin shouldn't play computer games when his grandmother was ill. He should help his sister look after their grandmother as possible as he can. On the other hand, Han Tong did very well. She set a good example for us to follow. All of us should learn from her.
【详解】
1. 题干解读：这是一篇材料作文。内容是根据以下汉语提示写一篇英文日记 , 并表达自己的看法。我们可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点： 1. 奶奶感到身体不适 , 看起来很痛苦 , 躺在床上 , 而她弟弟韩林却在开心玩着电脑游戏； 2. 韩彤询问奶奶病情、测体温 , 给父母打电话 , 并向网上医生求助； 3. 奶奶在韩彤帮助下服用合适的药物之后 , 身体状况好转； 4. 你认为： …… （至少两点）。
2. 例文点评：例文采用四段式；时态主要为一般过去时时。人称主要为第三人称。第一段介绍奶奶感到身体不适 , 看起来很痛苦 , 躺在床上 , 而她弟弟韩林却在开心玩着电脑游戏。第二段介绍韩彤询问奶奶病情、测体温 , 给父母打电话 , 并向网上医生求助。第三段介绍奶奶在韩彤帮助下服用合适的药物之后 , 身体状况好转。最后谈了自己的看法。
3. 高分亮点：
短语： as far as I know ； to my amazement ； instead of ； take care of ； try her best to ； thanks to ； as we all know ； on the one hand ， on the other hand ； learn from 。
句型： 1. When I got there, I found her grandmother felt ill, who looked so quite painful that she had to stay in bed. 当我到了那里，我发现她的祖母感到不舒服，她看起来很痛苦，她不得不躺在床上。
该句话是由 who 引导的非限制性定语从句。
2. However, to my amazement, he was still playing video games happily instead of doing anything to help take care of their grandmother, as if everything around him had nothing to do with him. 然而，令我惊讶的是，他仍然开心地玩着电子游戏，而不是做任何事情来帮助照顾他们的祖母，好像他周围的一切都与他无关。
此处是 as if 从句用虚拟语气。